This morning in my garden plot,
A snail munched on a lettuce leaf.
He looked quite beautiful, I thought-
His shell was fine beyond belief;
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Yen, this is one comment for your quartet of snail verses; I like what you've done, expressing simple points of view in a variety of ways - there is a freshness in each which makes them similar but different. If you know what I mean! Rgds, Ivan
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Yen, this is one comment for your quartet of snail verses; I like what you've done, expressing simple points of view in a variety of ways - there is a freshness in each which makes them similar but different. If you know what I mean! Rgds, Ivan