Saturday, June 13, 2009

Leaf-Gathering Comments

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The leaves gently falling
from my tree of life
each tells a story
of what was once
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Mahdokt Pretorius
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Pushkar Bisht 15 June 2009

It's a very beautiful poem you wrote from the heart. Memories never die they are always alive in our heart. Nice work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 June 2009

Element of love, leaf, the nature of sort signifies a great account of how love can relate to those faling leaves, like a gesture of a good companion.Well writes Mahdokt! ! !

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Gert Strydom 15 June 2009

This poem made me remember so times that passed. Really a great piece of poetry.

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