Wednesday, November 23, 2016

Leaf And Heart Comments

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leafage in the forest
may get the kisses of the sun
they are the darlings of the sun
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Cigeng Zhang
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Christopher Tye 30 November 2016

Really wonderful poem with really profound sentiments. Without leaves there would be no trees, without love the heart couldn't skip a beat and without the sun there couldn't be any life.

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Cigeng Zhang 06 December 2016

Thank you Christopher for your nice comment.I appreciate it as usual.

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Daniel Brick 30 November 2016

That's a wonderful connection between leaf and heart, both are parts of a larger entity but we treat them as symbols in themselves: of fragile beauty, of the sweet transience of life, of pure intentions, so many things that lift the spirit. As mine is re-reading your poem.I've focused recently on writing long, complicated poems. This one is a refreshment, a letting go.

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Cigeng Zhang 06 December 2016

Thank you Daniel for your beautiful sharing. Much appreciated.

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