Leaf 4 - Lilting Leaves & Beaming Branches Of Coconut Trees Comments

You have made an amusing depiction on leaves of coconut trees that not only dance with the breeze but also dance with the heart of the readers. I quote, ........ Like the swing and sway of the Lyrical Mohiniattam dancers of Kerala, Levering waves of the Arabian Sea, Lightning sweep of a watchful eagle, Lovely leaves and branches that I admire - Lyrical music and dance of a coconut tree! Beautiful poem brilliantly presented.

Wow! You have truly done justice to the humble coconut tree, nothing more can be added to this poem.Thanks Geeta

Perfect description of coconut leaves.. Love the flow of words. Beautiful poem.10

Your observations are detail and it just an ode to coconut leaves itself :) wonderful :) ....