Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Lead Me My Path Comments

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My path, where the river flows clean
Where words will not be mumbo jumbo
Where land is not green on other side
Where birds will fly even in night
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Padmapriya Boddapati 10 February 2010

May all your wishes come true. Cheers, and thanks for sharing a nice and refreshing poem.

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Sheldon Saluta 09 February 2010

You know what i like it so much! keep the pen writing!

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Antonio Liao 04 February 2010

a hope with in Faith...such a lovely poem of deep surrender to God...God bless a 10 +++

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Anju Addanki 03 February 2010

wow that was a cool one.Its so cool.

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Louis Rams 03 February 2010

if this land could exist it would be heavenly bliss. but just like a caveman picked up his fist stick to protect his cave this world will remain the same. great write

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 02 February 2010

A fine optimistic verse.

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Joseph Poewhit 02 February 2010

Brings forth nice wishes and hopes, in a wayward world.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 02 February 2010

Strange wishes, none will go for, are sought for in this poem nicely..

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 February 2010

poetry well applied..........

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Indira Renganathan 02 February 2010

A different thought...different write....with a tinge of fun and oddity...thank you

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