Le Dieu Qui Veille Sur Tout Peut-Etre.(Translation) . Comments

We watch over everything and feel the tenderness. This poem is truly excellent poem. We love this entirely..This deserves full 10.

At dawn the sky alone is occupied and we feel God's art. This has great imagery and this is rich poem with perception of face of ice.

Walking down Princes Street you have understood life very beautifully and you have expressed this nicely here.

For your full effort and full expression of imagery this poem deserves full 10 mark and I rate this for this lovely gem.

This poem is truly and excellently penned poem. This has rich imagery and this is very heart touching. An excellent poem is well penned.

We invite the white form of stone and ice motivates mind with dignity of our hope. The imagery is very clear. This is very nice.

Definitely ice has its own face. It strengthens and it melts. Light it holds in reflective surface. We love such ice in perception and beauty.

Beyond this creation we feel God's presence and we wonder die to his art. A woman carries motherhood and this art is given by God.

At dawn the sky alone is occupied by our perception and we feel God with entire beauty of joy and hope. This makes life glorious.

Yes your understanding had deep vale and you have understood that you have gone home. This perception is motivational perception.