Friday, September 11, 2020

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Look before you leap (L.B.Y.L)

A maiden damsel in distress tres chic
Beautifully standing lighting the street
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 September 2020

Indeed, so truest: Look before you leap (L.B.Y.L) Mesmerizing words, well caoptured the situation as it is. Crystal clear cutest conveyed, dear poet! Excellent thought-provoking poem. A 10++

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 September 2020

Your wonderful poem shows how easy it would be to destroy what was hard to build-a relationship of trust. Very nicely done.

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Varsha M 11 September 2020

This poem is really meaningful with all possibilities probabilities and abilities scrutinized under SWOT analysis deep down to the core or else it will beep lbyl...very beautiful. Thank-you.

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Aarzoo Mehek 11 September 2020

Aww that's one sweet and thought provoking poem. Indeed look before you leap stay away from sweet temptations.10++

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