Lazyboy Comments

A perfectly scripted lazy day... brilliantly done, Sonny! Brian

Good suggestions, Andrew. I added a couple of lines and revised a few others. I think my strong points are in writing very brief poems, such as haiku. I give up on a long poem very quickly. I'm sure that's why I don't write novels. Thanks, Andrew, for the recommendations.

And why not indeed Sonny, mimosa is such a relaxing fragrance. I wrote a poem about bathing in it once.10 from Tai