Monday, September 14, 2015

Lazy River Rondo Comments

Rating: 4.5

Lazy river run from the mountains to the sea
Challenged from the gravity of Earth’s motion
Slip into the ocean’s floor and rain once more.
Lazy river flow like a fountain endlessly
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Paul Amrod
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Paul Amrod 28 September 2015

It was certainly a big wish from myself to become a poet. Thank you for your gorgeous compliment. Greetings, Paul

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Sranisha Francis 28 September 2015

You are a Wonderful poet. beautiful.

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Paul Amrod 19 September 2015

Hi Tony Thank you so much. Yes I am a typical mystic Maronite. I am glad you have this beautiful God-given gift as well. Greetings, Paul

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 September 2015

Enduringly aware of the divinity of this mysterious metaphor we commence the process of enhancing our countenance. my dear Paul your poems are always full of mystery and that is your strength. thank you dear Paul .. gave you a 10

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Paul Amrod

Chateaugay, New York
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