Lazy Bones Comments

An absorbing and salutary tale told in verse. We all have our lazy intervals - but these 2 take it to another level! 'Enslaved as they were in idleness tied to its devilish pact' - my favourite line.

The story of these lazy brothers is not simply a yarn to tickle our senses! It carries a great message! Laziness robs one of many blisses and finally lands him in burning flames! Unless nipped in the early stage of invasion, it becomes an obsession! A poem that can make you smile and brood over! !

Very Beautifully you have portrayed Lazy Bones. Sad ending....It's very sad when one lies like a mere bones and helplessness to move is really a pity especially for old ones. Loved reading it.