Lazy-Bones Comments

The conclusion is interesting, for what is the 'pinnacle of life' referring to? Is the ultimate goal to be consumed? If so, how is that the peak of existence? Curious. The imagery is beautiful and the title excellent. The story is thought-provoking. Very interesting.

love the rhythm, the imagery and the build-up to the last line, Vipins

Secondary consumers will take on primary ones like richer take better lived than poorer...law of nature and therefore the fight to live better is on.Otherwise life is boring..Life ends in a crescendo as an elk cannot be crocodile...well conceptualized and the title has enough undercurrent within