Sunday, June 26, 2011

Lazy Afternoon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Listening to the haunting voice of Nina Simone
Celebrating time to myself as a temporary loan
Everything is quiet but thoughts are invading
Giving in to temptation reality is slowly fading
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Kristina Louisa Carr
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 26 June 2011

Nice poem. I liked it. It was written well with great texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Best regards Akmal

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Kristina Louisa Carr

Kristina Louisa Carr

Born: Cape Town, South Africa
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