Wednesday, July 15, 2020

Layla And Majnun By Daniel Brick Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dedicated to my Persian Princess,
Baharak Barzin

I have been following traces of Layla and Majnun.
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Daniel Brick
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Glen Kappy 16 July 2020

ah, daniel, this poem inspired some pleasant thoughts and meanderings. thank you. more in a separate email. blessings, brother! -glen

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

so powerful and heart touching: Oh, love, where have you fled? Is there not room in this mortal world for an immortal romance?

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

Dear poet Daniel, well done we are waiting for more, keep writing and stay blessed.. every success

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

This beautiful and powerful poem shows us the strength and ability of our professional poet; poetic wise, language, idea, imagery, meaning, symbols, and the success choice of the theme..That is how the good poet writes, Excellent and thanks for sharing your amazing works with us.

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

part1// Daniel Brick, as a veteran poet, with a wide knowledge of other cultures, folklore and epics.. sheds light in this poem on the true meaning of love in the time of no- love, even when the Layla and Majnun story ends tragically without meeting each others, and the two lovers died one after another from pain and torment,

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

part 2// , but Daniel here teaches us the true meaning of love and real hope, so that we can see these two lovers reborn in his poem and their hope is come true here, well done and it goes on to my fav list 10/10

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

I am convinced they are together during his performance. Then, the bitter truth assails me: it is a mirage, I was deceived by hope.

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Soran M. H 15 July 2020

flowers bending in the direction they took. The lovers and the flowers both follow the sun. As it begins to set, Layla and Majun blend into the darkness. …………

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