Friday, October 20, 2017

Laying Sick Comments

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She laid sick in her bed
Sometimes motionless as if she were dead,
She hates being there confined
That is not how her life is defined.
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Randy McClave
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2017

Though she is strong yet flu is making her weak as no food no appetite for a week. Touchingly narrated. Beautiful poem on sick.

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Randy Mcclave 21 October 2017

Even the strong and trained are weakened by sickness. Thank you for reading my poem. Randy

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