Thursday, November 3, 2011

Laying Broken Pieces Comments

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like a rope tight around the throat
leaves you gasping for more air
these dark secrets are choking,
tormenting me with such despair.
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Bella Hernandez 04 November 2011

Packed with emotion, you bring the reader to the edge and back. Beautiful work.

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Sarah Cotnam 04 November 2011

I like it. Reminds me of me a bit, and yet, at the same time, I don't know what it means (just as I don't know what 'I' mean) . If that makes sense.

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Hans Vr 03 November 2011

Very poetic expression of despair. With great poetic talent you us fantastic images to describe intense feelings. Please read Y..... a deep valley, on my third page

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Cosmic Dreamer 03 November 2011

Dark secrets devour the soul... Us mere mortals were never meant for such sorrow... I love your poem... You have a gift some can only dream of... Keep them coming...

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Saadat Tahir 03 November 2011

strong emotive and excel written :) be happy

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