Tuesday, September 5, 2017

Layers Of Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

My friend, it was just this morning
As I said "hi" to the day
I saw a beautiful sky
It wouldn't stay that way.
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Marilyn Lott
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Marilyn Lott 13 September 2017

I love our windmill and this is the first thing I see when I look out the office window. The fog adds so much to a scene I feel. Thank you so much for your very special comment.

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Abekah Emmanuel 12 September 2017

Beautiful and flowing poem. I love the rhymes, simple and natural.No wonder it is about mother nature. I like the apostrophe in the first stanza..saying hi to the day sounds really interesting. You really did well by capturing the beautiful sky with the camera. That was fantastic. Indeed, layers of nature were present. Beautiful poem. Keep it up!

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Captain Cur 05 September 2017

Marilyn, this poem is layered with many fine images, like a morning song captured with the camera of your eye, developed in the majesty of words!

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Rajnish Manga 05 September 2017

Excellent poem showcasing the beauty of an early morning scene- with melodious words as well as with a reflex action on camera. So lovely, so delightful. Thank you, Marilyn.

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

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