My friend, it was just this morning
As I said "hi" to the day
I saw a beautiful sky
It wouldn't stay that way.
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Beautiful and flowing poem. I love the rhymes, simple and natural.No wonder it is about mother nature. I like the apostrophe in the first stanza..saying hi to the day sounds really interesting. You really did well by capturing the beautiful sky with the camera. That was fantastic. Indeed, layers of nature were present. Beautiful poem. Keep it up!
Marilyn, this poem is layered with many fine images, like a morning song captured with the camera of your eye, developed in the majesty of words!
Excellent poem showcasing the beauty of an early morning scene- with melodious words as well as with a reflex action on camera. So lovely, so delightful. Thank you, Marilyn.
I love our windmill and this is the first thing I see when I look out the office window. The fog adds so much to a scene I feel. Thank you so much for your very special comment.