Many painful memories, kept deep hidden down her heart,
Like a secret it lay deep down since years.
Many colors of happiness she painted on top of it, to make it beautiful!
Each time she gave a layer of coating,
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Painful secrets waiting to be divulged! Once the mind is bared, the weight is lifted! A beautiful poem with an element of pathos, arresting and impressive!
This was a great great poem.... the meaning lay hidden very deep.. and loved it completely...
Self always knows what is behind the coatings. Beautiful poem.
life as tested all our patience to the max. wearing our mask of time. good imagery.
I like this idea, it sounds original and beautifully written...with sweet taste_Soul
The original self and the real being is rarely beheld, but under the multiple layers of coatings...sometimes hypocrisy, sometimes compulsion and sometimes the need of the hour! ! !