Tuesday, October 22, 2013

Layer Of Coatings! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many painful memories, kept deep hidden down her heart,
Like a secret it lay deep down since years.
Many colors of happiness she painted on top of it, to make it beautiful!
Each time she gave a layer of coating,
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Shahzia Batool 09 December 2013

The original self and the real being is rarely beheld, but under the multiple layers of coatings...sometimes hypocrisy, sometimes compulsion and sometimes the need of the hour! ! !

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Valsa George 29 November 2013

Painful secrets waiting to be divulged! Once the mind is bared, the weight is lifted! A beautiful poem with an element of pathos, arresting and impressive!

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Kanav Justa 21 November 2013

This was a great great poem.... the meaning lay hidden very deep.. and loved it completely...

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 October 2013

Self always knows what is behind the coatings. Beautiful poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 October 2013

Thank you Heather... Thank you my dear Soul..

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Heather Wilkins 23 October 2013

life as tested all our patience to the max. wearing our mask of time. good imagery.

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Unwritten Soul 22 October 2013

I like this idea, it sounds original and beautifully written...with sweet taste_Soul

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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