Saturday, July 11, 2009

Lay Us Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lay me down
Just set me on the ground
Please give me some air
And let me feel around
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Lillie Ellis
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Dave Dunn, aka Rhumour 20 July 2009

This is a charming poem Lillie - I'm sure with your insight you will be able to pen many more poems that will connect with the reader.

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~ Jon London ~ 18 July 2009

So melodic, and so emotionally written.....great work 10

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Aekg Navrilith 17 July 2009

Lovely dito to what Lee Crowell said

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Lee Crowell 16 July 2009

absolutely heartfelt work, I hear these words in a song keep up the good work Lillie, you will be going places with you talent

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