Saturday, July 11, 2009
Lay Us Down Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Lay me down
Just set me on the ground
Please give me some air
And let me feel around
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Lillie Ellis
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Lee Crowell
16 July 2009
absolutely heartfelt work, I hear these words in a song keep up the good work Lillie, you will be going places with you talent
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7/26/2025 8:33:59 PM # 1.0.0
This is a charming poem Lillie - I'm sure with your insight you will be able to pen many more poems that will connect with the reader.