Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, October 23, 2013

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One day I shall be able
To proclaim free from struggle
World as one place to live
Faith too only one and believe
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

fantastic Muskan Gupta14 hours ago realistic!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 October 2013

You write a lot. I rated you high on this just because anyone that puts this much effort into writing deserves some credit. Cheers. I'm new here and not sure how this process works, but.... It is clear that English is not your first language. I would like to suggest that you stop rhyming and use free form. Just say what you have to say and don't worry if it rhymes. It also lets you put words in an order that is natural.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Love It Jawahar Gupta12 minutes ago I may not be on earth, , , , Yes! True But We Love our planet. We are one! Comment +1 Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

vishakha rana20 minutes ago i liked it Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Nalinakshan Erattappuzha20 minutes ago Your sacrifice may be remembered and not go in vane

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Timileyin Gabriel Olajuwon likes this. Timileyin Gabriel Olajuwon Inspired! This is beautifully written... I have a dream that one day, peace will be the ruling king. 4 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

One day I shall be able To proclaim free from struggle

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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