Friday, August 26, 2005

Lay Me Down Comments

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Lay me down,
On eider and on lace,
That I may see the love,
Upon your face,
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Linda Harnett
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Matthew Pearson 26 August 2005

'Lay me in the shadow, Of your smile', 'On silken summer sand'. As poetry, this is as hackneyed as President Bush's impression of a simpleton. That aside, I hope this poem did/ does the trick.

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