Thursday, October 20, 2011

Lay Me Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

let me fade away


let me die
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rita soto
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Ralph The Elf 02 November 2011

i love this poem its a bit short though

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A Lifetime Of Fame 25 October 2011

I echo Ashley. It makes me wanna sing. This is my first time reading any of your poetry, but i look foward to much more. Excellent work.

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Ashley Bachtel 21 October 2011

I like this one. it sounds like somethng you could make into a song

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