Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, April 10, 2014

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You can not properly offer
With stable mind for prayer
Hunger may trouble and divert
Your attention and subvert
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

Oana Vasiliu, Shujat Ahmad and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

Truth ekayen essien11 minutes ago Real, true. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

nice Leenelle Atkinson10 minutes ago nice! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

very good Jane Lomas12 minutes ago hum rhyming for rhyming sake its ok but needs a little work

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 April 2014

You can not properly offer With stable mind for prayer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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