Saturday, April 15, 2023

Law-Suit Comments

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The law is bookish.
Says the British.
What do it can? ?
Questions the American.
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Drich The Poet
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Bri Edwards 26 April 2023

I would not trust S. Feldman to speak for all PH members. ; (

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Bri Edwards 26 April 2023

'What do it can? ? ' ? ? ? How about 'What can it do? ' But still I won't understand the meaning perhaps. I DID finish reading poem, but it was not clear enough for me. 'welcome to PH' bri ;)

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Drich The Poet 01 May 2023

I tried to get it to rhyme and ultimately that was the only way that came to mind. It's not wrong, or is it?

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Drich The Poet 01 May 2023

Thanks 😊

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Sandra Feldman 15 April 2023

Very clever, righteous and deep. This poem speaks the lawful truth so hard to find, so hard to keep. Excellent work, to keep freshly in mind and spirit!

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Drich The Poet 16 April 2023

Thanks. It's sad thing but that's our reality

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