Lawless World Comments

a good picture of reality. i like it.

straight talker i will give you 10

it is the worldwide situation, no one can deny. in 1977-78 i had composed one hindi poem and now posted with title Auction. three sentence of that poem is - something sold in the name of justice, something in the name of relief and some thing in the name of inqualaab i.e. revolution and now i am seeing it true. you have sketched the true picture of society.

So true. You hit points here that are seeming to be overlooked. Always good to have that one poem that can open up other's eyes to what's really going on

Thanks big brother, for this poem...every word is true and the poem....great as always...

it just describes the world as it is..even if we try not to see it that way, it's the truth. this poem shows just what actually happens in the world we believe to be nice, even though somehow we've seen how wrong we are..this poem is so well penned..

violence breeds violence, the sickness within erupts! strong poem!

i like the reality and gusto in your poem. You are so good dad

It's like that old saw about, the plumber always has stopped up pipes...or something like that, lol..i.e. 'the carpenters house is always about to fall over..'(smile)

Dave Alan Walker, Your poem is really shocking! ! We have these issues in our continents, but not so rampant.

Strong poem with strong message. Well written