Sunday, June 10, 2018

Law Of Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

Laborious persons often get their fruits
Laboured wealth is valuable more
Labyrinth can't entangle them
Lack for nothing they feel ever.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Robert Murray Smith 24 June 2018

An interesting write. Enjoyed.++10

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 June 2018

Write comment. Great poem in which the poet seeks guidance of God. Thanks for sharing sir Mahakul.

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Mj Lemon 11 June 2018

I am reminded of the idle hands. A very moving poem, Kumarmani.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 June 2018

Let God lead us to right path. Great message, great prayer, Amen!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2018

I profusely admire the wisdom embodied in this beautiful piece of work! Thanks dear sir for sharing...10

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Bill Cantrell 10 June 2018

When I peer into this poem, I behold a structure of order, nature is the result of Gods expression of love to and for us! Only with law from the Devine do we have hope, I love this and all your poems, you are a spiritual man and I love that!

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Muzahidul Reza 10 June 2018

Law of nature is God gifted so that human can learn, but sorry is that they are not learning, on the other hand they are abusing it dangerously, ........... greatly write, thanks for sharing,10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 June 2018

A great spiritual write full of wisdom. Liked the last stanza. An inspiring piece of work.10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 June 2018

Lashing times! ! Overcoming the odds of life with the truth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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