Sunday, August 3, 2014

Law Of Fences Comments

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This is the woods I know
It was dense, now lean
Its limits are patented
Still charm clogged in borders
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Akhtar Jawad 04 August 2014

A deep and thoughtful poem, a very well wrote poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 August 2014

Thoughtful poem with great meaning in it. Very true said in lines..Still charm clogged in borders. Everything in nature is fenced...Yes, everything comes in restriction. concluding lines are very beautiful and positive too.. Love can wipe out all these fences Rest of the fence remain in you Wipe it at least for today's feast! ! ! Yes, Love has that power it can break any fence....Loved it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 03 August 2014

All the fences are visited developing the law in conclusion. Love has no fences it can remove those existing. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 August 2014

Very insightful........and we know the limitation of all things choked up by universal laws that could be broken by love only...........nice concept nicely

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