Tuesday, March 14, 2006

Lavender Wispy Willow Comments

Rating: 0.0

Tangerine lily trumpets melodious sounds
Announcing the arrival of their new Queen
Her presence has graced Sugarlands grounds
A thousand years passed a new era is seen
...
Read full text

Carole Cookie Arnold
COMMENTS
K. Jared Hosein 14 March 2006

A saccharine and sweet (literally) poem, equipped with a flowing rhyme scheme and descriptions that scintillate. Vivid imagery in a portrait of a colourful world, nice work. - K.

0 0 Reply
Carole Cookie Arnold

Carole Cookie Arnold

Ft. Lauderdale Florida
Close
Error Success