Tuesday, November 17, 2020

Lavender Field Comments

Rating: 5.0

A stem of pale lilac hue,
Alongside those of purple and blue,
The scent entwined with grasses that sway,
Sweet lavender fragrance dances away.
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Sarah Persson
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Unnikrishnan E S 17 November 2020

What a lovely pic just in a few words. Very colourful and touching my mind

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Khairul Ahsan 17 November 2020

A beautiful poem Sarah, as beautiful as the picture of the lavender field. The last stanza is so lovely: 'The wind will upsurge, With indulgences sweet, Momentos of summer days, Drifting on purple haze.'. The poem, so well written, deserves full marks and I gladly give it: 5 Stars *****! I recommend this poem to be selected as the 'Member Poem of the Day' for any day soon.

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Sarah Persson 17 November 2020

Thank you Deluke for your comment. I’m flattered and humbled by your words

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Deluke Muwanigwa 17 November 2020

Lovely poem. Nice rhyming. These beautiful scenes and poems are rhe reason i just want to go on living

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