Wednesday, April 4, 2007

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cool mountain breeze blowing
snow capped mountains
my heart cries to see the mountains
warm days in the sun
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KK, there is such tremendous longing in this poem, and you've achieved it in so very few words. Not wordy, just enough words to make your readers feel your longing for home, and maybe for their own longing for home as well. Nice job.

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