Thursday, June 25, 2009

Lava Hell Comments

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Standing in the moonlight
Alone, with a lonely heart
I feel the words are broken
because scream your throat out
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Arjun K Das
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Nooruddeen Mm 25 June 2009

Standing in the........ ....... scream your throat out Excellent star, the first lines as well as yours. Good flow, nicely written. Keep it up. Nooruddeen

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Arjun K Das

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Kottayam, India
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