Lava Flow Comments

Intense! ! With the muse of nature. Nice work.

This is a fun way to explain an ex... I have met people like this... Great poem

Wow talk about a meltdown.haha ha! ! ! ! ! !

haha...this is awesome...no offence, but she reminds me of my mother...that woman could strip paint with her tongue...nice work here.

Excellent metaphors... but hey... in her defence... at least she was HOT! ! ! - Good one TJ..... 10/10

Hahahahaha! ! ! An element of surprise...hilarious but deeply serious.... I like this one. but when time cools its magma, it just sleep hard.

Some pple don't feel remorse because they know they haven't done anything wrong... And others who simply don't know what they really think and feel are always very keen on fireing their judgements, especially those who know they are responsible for quite a big mess... Fine piece... Lol I like your metaphor - frank and fair volcanic strenght is something one admires and wants to follow whenever it is necessary...

Pour a bucket of cold water over her that will put her out take a leaf from another poet (plenty more fish in the sea, get yourslf a good rod) 10 from Chris