Thursday, June 8, 2017

Laureates In My Home Comments

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My home is a place to get together
For the lovely living laureates I know
It's a pink home of flowers and a fountain
I wish to show you but I cannot show!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

I admire your optimism expressed so passionately I hope they are listening. Thank you sir

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2017

Guns will be changed in flowers Boarders will be changed in bridges Below the bridges will be river of love Couples on the boats made by cartridges! .... let's hope so. A brilliant and beautiful poem. Many thanks dear Jawadji....10

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Valsa George 14 June 2017

The earth shaking man's erratic extremism Deadly destroying and killing nationalism Furious and frightening old fundamentalism Will be changed in peaceful internationalism Beautiful lines..... Splendid write! It would be beautiful to land in your heavenly home of laureates! A sure 10

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Chinedu Dike 08 June 2017

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice, in an insightful poem embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Awesome! You have a powerful and intense stance in capturing Universal Brotherhood Of Man. Kudos Akhtar and remain blessed.

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Khalida Bano Ali 08 June 2017

A wonderful poem, yes future of world is in the hands of our children, let us hope the best.

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