Thursday, April 28, 2016

Laura Comments

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LAURA

Incandescent butterfly!
Gossamer wings glittering with delicate steel lattice, velvet strength.
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Pamela Ascroft
butterfly daughter strength kindness
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Bill Cantrell 28 April 2016

Absolutely wonderful descriptive poetry of both inner and outer beauty, choice words placed as gems!

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Tom Billsborough 28 April 2016

A series of beautifully worked images like a kaleidoscope effect. Very unusual style and much appreciated. Is Laura your daughter? A straight ten from me. It is poetry. There is often more poetry in this format than in regular verse. This is certainly the case with your piece, Tom Billsborough

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Pamela Ascroft 28 April 2016

Thank you so much! I so appreciate your feedback. Laura is a dear friend, though I do have a daughter :)

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Vancouver, BC, Canada
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Vancouver, BC, Canada
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