Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Laundry Comments

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Coloured skins of Men
somersault and rejoice
in the dryer's tepid breeze
after sloughing sweats and sins
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Pradeep Dhavakumar
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Francesca Johnson 27 July 2006

An artistic and colourful description of what is, after all, a mundane activity. You've brought it to life, Pradeep. Some interesting phrases used, too... Love, Fran xx

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