Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Laundromat Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’d like to save a child from
a laundromat fire.
Or even two children.
Lay their helpless, smoking bodies at the feet
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Brian Mayo
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Simone Inez Harriman 04 July 2017

it would feel pretty amazing to go down in history as achieving something extraordinary, or saving someones life, or changing the world for the better in some way. That would surely make a life so well lived and worth it :)

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Bri Edwards 19 March 2016

i got lost with the second stanza. oops. here i am. may i offer another laundromat poem? Submitted at Poem Share 1 (money) Laundering...... [white Collar? Crime; Inept 'Criminal'] reviewed 3/9/2013 good luck finding a good deed to make your life worthwhile. bri :)

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