Thursday, February 4, 2010

Laughter Of A Child Comments

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Listen to a footstep as it taps around and about.
In corridors and passages that lead to gates,
Though closed it manages to break through bars
And land softly on ears close and far.
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xolisa stuurman
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Lady Grace 04 February 2010

this is very nice...i like the presentation..the first stanza is written in the other next stanza, there are ''stressed'' lines...so it gives more weight to the lines that is stressed previously.., , the meaning is compact, my goshhhh...wait, i cant explain well coz for me, this is super nice...super nice and super nice....this will go to my fav dear..smileeeeeeeee

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