The light turned red
and there I sat
and watched a cuddle
inside a puddle.
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a tale well told the wisdom true and sure and can't argue with laughter's power redemption no easy task here just comes into the lines flawlessly a fine poem
I love the twist at the end.........I was wondering where the laughter was gonna come in from your title....this was great. I liked how it was so sad at first and then ends with happy laughter! What a wonderful poem! Sincerely, Mary
Well, I don't know if your medicine will work, but I've really enjoyed taking it. This is a scream, Herbert. 'Hell hath no fury like a bird bereaved', eh? Ha ha ha!
i like bird poems herbert and i reward good bird poems, and this is quite a good story poem and your right laughter is the best medicene Warm regards AJS
Herbert, you have a deliciously twisted mind...and you make me laugh. Raynette