Monday, January 16, 2006

Laughter As Medicine Comments

Rating: 3.5

The light turned red
and there I sat
and watched a cuddle
inside a puddle.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Raynette Eitel 16 January 2006

Herbert, you have a deliciously twisted mind...and you make me laugh. Raynette

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Charles Chaim Wax 16 January 2006

a tale well told the wisdom true and sure and can't argue with laughter's power redemption no easy task here just comes into the lines flawlessly a fine poem

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Mary Nagy 16 January 2006

I love the twist at the end.........I was wondering where the laughter was gonna come in from your title....this was great. I liked how it was so sad at first and then ends with happy laughter! What a wonderful poem! Sincerely, Mary

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Gina Onyemaechi 16 January 2006

Well, I don't know if your medicine will work, but I've really enjoyed taking it. This is a scream, Herbert. 'Hell hath no fury like a bird bereaved', eh? Ha ha ha!

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Allan James Saywell 16 January 2006

i like bird poems herbert and i reward good bird poems, and this is quite a good story poem and your right laughter is the best medicene Warm regards AJS

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