Tuesday, September 29, 2009

Laughter Comments

Rating: 5.0

I love to get a dance right.
When a dance does go wrong
makes me laugh uncontrollably.
I hold my sides -
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Margaret Donaghy 30 October 2009

nice poem...keep writing..............

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Jessica Hoffman 09 October 2009

indeed, very nice poem I love it 10

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Jennifer Kaleigh 09 October 2009

A wonderful write............full of ideas.........

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Gwenda Madison 06 October 2009

liked your poem.giving the word flights a new meaning..............

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Marieta Maglas 02 October 2009

wonderful descriptive meditative poem, lovely to read...10

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