Sunday, March 22, 2009

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More than the bubble and swirl of a stream
That finds humour in its rush
From source to the sea;
Faster than flurry of leaves
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Les Derbyshire
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June Feir-Cruz 01 April 2009

This is a wonderful poem. Gives the reader an insight that you are a people person who observes life and feels happy for others - you find unity in their happines and that's a great trait to have. Bravo! !

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Stephen Stirk 23 March 2009

A beautiful thought provoking piece. Imagery often makes a poem, as it is imagery in poet eloquence that stands a poem out from others. This is a succinct and arty read. Thanks for posting. Steve

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