Laughing Girl Comments

very sweet poem, nice to have a person like that every now and then, just to put a smile on your heart: 0)

Wow, who cares about grammatical errors. I loved it! (:

I am dissapointed. This poem is scanty and weak. Its too abstract and there are some grammatical errors in the text which messes up the entire flow. It could have been better. I kinda see where you were going with it but its not finished. Maybe if it were longer and more alive then it would be more pleasant to read. I believe I have wasted my time reading a poem that has no point written by a writer who has no feeling in what he has written. If this is the best that can come from a creative mind then what has the world come to? But I am just one person and there are many interpretations on a poem. Others could actually like this meager poem. Sorry for my bluntness but I give it a 2.