Laugh-Making Comments

a new definition of laughter emerges here...laughter: golden gate to love. gr8!

nice poem indeed and i will make u laf hehe amazing

Perfection. t x

Love and laughter - a wonderful combination blended together against the backdropp of a lush landscape - ripe words here Onelia. j x

Beautiful sunny poem, I loved the watermelons! ! Gorgeous penning Onelia... HG: -) xx

Wonderful....made me smile and moved me... all that movement excitement and laughter..... Just smashing writing! rx

lough yet obsessive by the shadow laugter still extends beyond and within as meadow still burns by the green the golden gate seems to open by the muse...............excellent write by the imagery of unique genere, and i lough still,10/10, thanks for sharing

You're right - of course, you're right! Delightful poem. As exuberant as a giggle! F

This made me smile! Totally agree with you...goes for me too! Ain't it de truth! Beautiful in its observation and the tiny details that make it so real. Love it! See...I'm laughing.. laughing! love Donall Donall

so sweet and lovely...thanks for sharing

Yes, this is it! There is an economy of words with staccato rhythms, and they all punctuate - laughter! Laugh-making takes on a new meaning. Beautiful, rgds Ivan