Saturday, August 12, 2017

Later I Would Think Of America Comments

Rating: 5.0

Out of the sprawl slouching through the money jungle -
a sound like feet on stairways going up and
down never stops and love is a doleful saxophone
in a cubicle room. Some things are not the way
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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2021

WHERE are you, busy with VLAK Magazine? Please keep creating poetry, though it is your daily life, it IS always impressive and interesting

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 October 2021

Good poem about life where you are at that moment.Your eyes can see excekllently and your ears hear all things very sharp. Bit sad poem, lamenting but at your age, it is constantly a Song of Laments. Great poem I tell you, sure 5 Stars full.

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