My eyes seemed to wander
and my mind started to look
as I gazed into that eye of yours
that caught me like a hook
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It is but boggling.... why keep your identity? ...haha i seem to know the man behind these lines.. yet still he denied it when I asked.. haha.. right nash? ? ? .. hehe.. anyway.. nice write...^_^
hmmm... sounds familiar as if I read it somewhere in school.. posted on the bulletin of my classroom... (said with sarcasm) ., But then again.. It seems like you keep such secrecy for it is impossible to reach? ? .. Though I really like the title.. 'Latent Fragility'.. :) Continue writting..
wow that was really beautiful my vote is a 10 because this poem deserves it! ! :) :)