Monday, September 12, 2005

Late Summer Sonnet Comments

Rating: 4.3

Where did the Columbines and Lupines go
The Alliums that stood so straight and neat
The raspberries with all their bright red glow
That children did consider such a treat?
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Peter A. Crowther 12 September 2005

I think you did. It gives a charming picture of a garden at this time of year.

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Velvet Thorn 12 September 2005

When I started to write this, I had no idea what I was getting into; the sonnet style is tight and confining. I hope I did it justice.

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