Late Night Ramble Comments

Your writing style is distinct, completely different then the norm but wonderfully so. I have to read them twice sometimes to see exactly where you're going with them but when the finality hits I go 'oh yah true that' Keep up the great work.

Wow- really hit me in the gut. This is a courageous expression of a collective emptiness and search for some sort of 'fix'- any kind of fix to temporarily assuage that feeling- that many more people feel than would admit. It's the underbelly of our neatly wrapped and ribboned-tied society with more longing than fulfillment and more need than satisfaction. Real, desperate, and courageous in its honesty and bare-bones truth devoid of pretense. Excellent poem.

Interesting man, pretty depressing, but I often write similarly haha...i like this line in particular 'world is full of shake' for some reason that brought up alot of images for me.