Tuesday, December 13, 2005

Late-Night Interruption Comments

Rating: 4.5

Invisible tears stream inside me
In scalding alkaline trails
Melting my heart which was whole
Into a mutilated mass of clay
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Velvet Thorn
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***** ********* 13 December 2005

Nice Poem Velvet Thorn, all I can say is, 'Never offer to share again! ' You can't do right for doing wrong and some people, you can never please. 9 from Tai still trying!

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