Sunday, July 3, 2011

Late Night City Comments

Rating: 5.0

the city lights look so mesmerizing beyond this river,
here, water flows creating rythmic waves,
& with the wind, they sing me lullabies.
trying to sing me to sleep.
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Prarthana Ranjit
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 July 2011

It was a marvellous poem written with great skill and wisdom. Great imagery and a fine style. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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