Saturday, July 27, 2013

Late Morning Lullaby Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cooing of doves, twitter of birds
High in the canopy they frolic and chirp
The rain has just ended its song
The pearly drops hang quite long
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Yasmin Khan
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Jodie Hardy 27 August 2013

Wow, a stunning visual poem, I can imagine being where you are. x x

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Saadat Tahir 08 August 2013

Right! .....In the exalted tradition of great classic masters, a lovely celebration of nature and its endowments. A charming style, written with a blooming heart that sees, appreciates and enjoys beauty around it... a positive and endearing view is presented in flowery lines that frolic with the breeze like so many lilies Beautifully penned… lovely

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Hira Akhtar 07 August 2013

well its a abeautiful poem..The use of figurative language is mind blowing..applause :)

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Shahzia Batool 06 August 2013

You paint a poem in composition! beautiful! ! !

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Joseph Anderson 04 August 2013

A splendid ode to all things natural.With imagery and brevity you have painted a beautiful picture-great write

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David Wood 03 August 2013

Nature in all its splendour is a wondrous thing.

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Heather Wilkins 02 August 2013

you have incorporated a lot of beautiful imagery in your poem. nice very nice

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 July 2013

Beautiful morning. Nicely expressed.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2013

Its so nice to be with nature.Very nice.Liked it.

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