The cooing of doves, twitter of birds
High in the canopy they frolic and chirp
The rain has just ended its song
The pearly drops hang quite long
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Right! .....In the exalted tradition of great classic masters, a lovely celebration of nature and its endowments. A charming style, written with a blooming heart that sees, appreciates and enjoys beauty around it... a positive and endearing view is presented in flowery lines that frolic with the breeze like so many lilies Beautifully penned… lovely
well its a abeautiful poem..The use of figurative language is mind blowing..applause :)
A splendid ode to all things natural.With imagery and brevity you have painted a beautiful picture-great write
you have incorporated a lot of beautiful imagery in your poem. nice very nice
Wow, a stunning visual poem, I can imagine being where you are. x x