Are you the Aphrodite of the Greek tales
Or the Artemis who admirers drooling sent?
No, for Aphrodite had her little flaws
And Artemis the fortunes of Orion bent.
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A well-crafted poem that shows a good grip on history, and a lovely reading it makes. Happy yo read your poem, Hannington Muno. I give full marks.
Well conceived and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme from the heart. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Hannington.
History! Nice work with the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I love the originality shown here. A brillant show of emotion. KW
Quite compelling write surcharged with emotion by the unique imagery and metaphors, well crafted,10+, thanks for sharing
A well-crafted poem indeed! Beautiful imagery and sublime expression!
I love the mythical references. A love that never was, beautifully expressed in wonderful images.
Oh this is so beautiful, I love the strong emotional intent and your word usage is phenomenal.....
thanks for sharing the poem. I love the way it's written, the words you used - for i will have a lots to learn. Yet, I find it beautifully done. Nhatthuyvi
I'd rather lose myself.....such strong emotion, and such a real feeling announcer! Brave in your bold testimony of a great love, gone to another. Beautiful. PEACE
Your choice of words is spellbinding with very inspired lines that are captivating!
Your poem is full of sweet and adoring words. Late love is better than none at all. patiently waiting. Lovely.
The references to the characters in various myths remind me of the great poetry Sanskrit Poet Kaalidasa, who lived in India about two thousand years back. Beautiful. The love that kindles such aesthetic works, is really limitless