Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Late June Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer oozed
from the night sky
leaving behind
sweat-slick stains
...
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W.I. Stoneberger
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I love the alliteration throughout and the vividness of your words. 'Summer oozed from the sky' captured me from the start. Loved it! 10 Karin Anderson

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